Utopian System
Utopian System
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SUMMARY
“Mana to breathe, mana to eat, mana to fucking live,”
Inhale: -0.001 MP… oops! You're out of mana points.
(Pay-to-breathe RPG.)
Humanity's last walled stronghold.
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In the world Elio lives, every gasp of air comes at a price.
A floating indestructible book for every human, a magical system that turns survival into a pay-to-breathe RPG.
Here, poverty isn't just being broke, it's choking.
Surrounded by barren land and a sea of monsters on top of it (No water, just literal monsters), each day is a suffocating dance of survival, a balancing act between mana for air and mana for food.
In this economy, holding your breath isn't just a game, it's a retirement plan.
Driven by desperation (and the city's miserly rulers that don’t cut anyone a break), Elio dives into the Book System’s trials to save his family.
Along the way, he unlocks powers he didn’t ask for and starts to figure out... Who he really is.
Immerse yourself in an adventure where one young man's stubborn refusal to become a statistic could spark a revolution. Who knew being a pain in the system's rear could change the world?
Because in Elio's world, breathing is just the beginning of the revolution and... he's gasping for change.
But hey, who said saving the world had to be all doom and gloom? Join Elio as he kicks monster butt, uncovers ancient secrets, and maybe, just maybe, figures out how to grow a tree or two along the way.
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Warning:
May contain traces of world domination, an unhealthy obsession with the periodic table, damage points, progression math, and yes, even a sprinkle of that old “power of friendship” magic. Because sometimes, you need a buddy to help you remember which element does what or even help you calculate those sweet, sweet stats.
A quick heads-up:
Despite what the cover might suggest, this isn’t a hack-and-slash adventure. Think more along the lines of a turn-based RPG, where strategy and choices matter as much as action. Get ready for a different kind of challenge!
If you want to know more about the cover:
Yep, that's our first FL crying and crossing the transparent barrier straight into a pixelated, indistinguishable sea of monsters. Because why not mix emotions with chaos? She's crazy like that! (Not really... or is she?)
Discord to check the visuals: https://discord.gg/W3CjfC2cw4
I’m still working on it in the little moments I find between writing, editing, making more character images, etc.
Little by little, we’ll have a Poked... uh, a full SummonDex! Meanwhile, you can check out the ones on Fandom with their... funny descriptions? Or at least I hope so... orz
Warning 2 (Privilege 4 and 5):
I just wanted to stick to the novel’s level system, so I had to add those '0s'!!! Don’t be an elephant... unless you’re an enormous one... A whale! Seriously, nooooo!
You’re going to make me die from the pressure, and I’ll feel terrible!! It’s just one chapter!!! You can wait... But if you’re dirty rich and really, Really, REALLY want to support, well... okay, though I’ll still feel bad!!! orz
6 Latest Chapters[ Updated 2 hours ago ]
Chapter List
- Chapter 1 - 1: System’s Book
- Chapter 2 - 2: System’s First level
- Chapter 3 - 3: System’s Offer
- Chapter 4 - 4: System’s Second level
- Chapter 5 - 5: System’s Decision
- Chapter 6 - 6: System’s Prank
- Chapter 7 - 7: System’s Food
- Chapter 8 - 8: System’s Insult
- Chapter 9 - 9: System’s Tower
- Chapter 10 - 10: System’s Summon
- Chapter 11 - 11: System’s Slice of life
- Chapter 12 - 12: System’s Mother
- Chapter 13 - 13: System’s Third level
- Chapter 14 - 14: System’s Deficit
- Chapter 15 - 15: System’s Challenge
- Chapter 16 - 16: System’s Grudge
- Chapter 17 - 17: System’s Magical Magnetism
- Chapter 18 - 18: System’s Deal
- Chapter 19 - 19: System’s Second Deal
- Chapter 20 - 20: System’s 40%
- Chapter 21 - 21: System’s New Percentage
- Chapter 22 - 22: System’s Training
- Chapter 23 - 23: System’s Results
- Chapter 24 - 24: System’s Plan
- Chapter 25 - 25: System’s Reunion
- Chapter 26 - 26: System’s Duel
- Chapter 27 - 27: System’s Duel - 2
- Chapter 28 - 28: System’s Consequences
- Chapter 29 - 29: System’s Consequences - 2
- Chapter 30 - 30: System’s Regeneration
- Chapter 31 - 31: System’s New Squad
- Chapter 32 - 32: System’s Cores
- Chapter 33 - 33: System’s New City Defenders
- Chapter 34 - 34: System’s Rising Tide
- Chapter 35 - 35: System’s Rising Tide - 2
- Chapter 36 - 36: System’s Reflection
- Chapter 37 - 37: System’s Heroes
- Chapter 38 - 38: System’s Homecoming
- Chapter 39 - 39: System’s Reconciliation
- Chapter 40 - 40: System’s Onslaught
- Chapter 41 - 41: System’s Onslaught - 2
- Chapter 42 - 42: System’s Onslaught 3
- Chapter 43 - 43: System’s Resilience
- Chapter 44 - 44: System’s Betrayal
- Chapter 45 - 45: System’s Machinations
- Chapter 46 - 46: System’s Crossroads
- Chapter 47 - 47: System’s Ultimatum
- Chapter 48 - 48: System’s Young Grandpa
- Chapter 49 - 49: System’s Confinement
- Chapter 50 - 50: System’s Companion
- Chapter 51 - 51: System’s Exploration
- Chapter 52 - 52: System’s Discovery
- Chapter 53 - 53: System’s Genesis
- Chapter 54 - 54: System’s Genesis - 2
- Chapter 55 - 55: System’s Ultimatum
- Chapter 56 - 56: System’s Ultimatum - 2
- Chapter 57 - 57: System’s Confrontation
- Chapter 58 - 58: System’s Balance
- Chapter 59 - 59: System’s Echoes of Conflict
- Chapter 60 - 60: System’s Liberation
- Chapter 61 - 61: System’s Intervention
- Chapter 62 - 62: System’s Patriarch
- Chapter 63 - 63: System’s Revelation
- Chapter 64 - 64: System’s Dilemma
- Chapter 65 - 65: System’s Parapet
- Chapter 66 - 66: System’s Sacrifice
- Chapter 67 - 67: System’s Defiance
- Chapter 68 - 68: System’s Fourth level
- Chapter 69 - 69: System’s Respite
- Chapter 70 - 70: System’s Windfall
- Chapter 71 - 71: System’s Temporary Hole
- Chapter 72 - 72: System’s Temporary Hole - 2
- Chapter 73 - 73: System’s Ascension
- Chapter 74 - 74: System’s Ascension - 2
- Chapter 75 - 75: System’s Ascension - 3
- Chapter 76 - 76: System’s Ascension - 4
- Chapter 77 - 77: System’s Fifth level
- Chapter 78 - 78: System’s Synthesis
- Chapter 79 - 79: System’s Outcome
- Chapter 80 - 80: System’s Gathering
- Chapter 81 - 81: System’s Muscles
- Chapter 82 - 82: System’s Recount
- Chapter 83 - 83: System’s Promise
- Chapter 84 - 84: System’s Tragedy
- Chapter 85 - 85: System’s Heartbeat
- Chapter 86 - 86: System’s Urgency
- Chapter 87 - 87: System’s Inferno
- Chapter 88 - 88: System’s Sadness
- Chapter 89 - 89: System’s Storm
- Chapter 90 - 90: System’s Reckoning
- Chapter 91 - 91: System’s Vengeance
- Chapter 92 - 92: System’s Score
- Chapter 93 - 93: System’s Fairness
- Chapter 94 - 94: System’s Parallel
- Chapter 95 - 95: System’s Sacrifice
- Chapter 96 - 96: System’s Warrior
- Chapter 97 - 97: System’s Spear
- Chapter 98 - 98: System’s Resolution
- Chapter 99 - 99: System’s Family
- Chapter 100 - 100: System’s Redemption
- Chapter 101 - 101: System’s Sacred flame
- Chapter 102 - 102: System’s Rest
- Chapter 103 - 103: System’s Armor
- Chapter 104 - 104: System’s Victims
- Chapter 105 - 105: Systems’s Rumors
- Chapter 106 - 106: System’s Democracy
- Chapter 107 - 107: System’s Preparations
- Chapter 108 - 108: System’s Fire Rain
- Chapter 109 - 109: System’s Delve
- Chapter 110 - 110: System’s Trap
- Chapter 111 - 111: System’s Battlefield
- Chapter 112 - 112: System’s Battlefield - 2
- Chapter 113 - 113: System’s Limit
- Chapter 114 - 114: System’s Rage
- Chapter 115 - 115: System’s Squash
- Chapter 116 - 116: System’s Origin
- Chapter 117 - 117: System’s Stake
- Chapter 118 - 118: System’s Winner
- Chapter 119 - 119: System’s Turning Point
- Chapter 120 - 120: System’s Counter
- Chapter 121 - 121: System’s Inheritance
- Chapter 122 - 122: System’s New Leader
- Chapter 123 - 123: System’s Uncertainty
- Chapter 124 - 124: System’s Progress
- Chapter 125 - 125: System’s Vow
- Chapter 126 - 126: System’s Vow - 2
- Chapter 127 - 127: System’s Shadows
- Chapter 128 - 128: The System’s Great Bite
- Chapter 129 - 129: System’s Allocation
- Chapter 130 - 130: System’s Fans
- Chapter 131 - 131: System’s Temptation
- Chapter 132 - 132: System’s Temptresses
- Chapter 133 - 133: System’s New Problems
- Chapter 134 - 134: System’s City of Summoners
- Chapter 135 - 135: System’s Conundrum
- Chapter 136 - 136: System’s Compromise
- Chapter 137 - 137: System’s Celebrity
- Chapter 138 - 138: System’s Entanglement
- Chapter 139 - 139: System’s New Beginning
- Chapter 140 - 140: System’s Overkill
- Chapter 141 - 141: System’s New Power
- Chapter 142 - 142: System’s Numbers
- Chapter 143 - 143: System’s Perspective
- Chapter 144 - 144: System’s Billion
- Chapter 145 - 145: System’s New Home
- Chapter 146 - 146: System’s Undercurrents
- Chapter 147 - 147: System’s Humor
- Chapter 148 - 148: System’s Hesitation
- Chapter 149 - 149: System’s Disappearance
- Chapter 150 - 150: System’s Soap Opera
- Chapter 151 - 151: System’s Soap Opera - 2
- Chapter 152 - 152: System’s Soap Opera - 3
- Chapter 153 - 153: System’s Soap Opera - 4
- Chapter 154 - 154: System’s Warning
- Chapter 155 - 155: System’s Arrangements
- Chapter 156 - 156: System’s Arrangements - 2
- Chapter 157 - 157: System’s Arrangements - 3
- Chapter 158 - 158: System’s Gratitude
- Chapter 159 - 159: System’s First Temptation
- Chapter 160 - 160: System’s Arrangements - 4
- Chapter 161 - 161: System’s Spy
- Chapter 162 - 162: System’s Spy - 2
- Chapter 163 - 163: System’s Enemies
- Chapter 164 - 164: System’s Spies
- Chapter 165 - 165: System’s Ploy
- Chapter 166 - 166: System’s Free Levels
- Chapter 167 - 167: The System’s Preparations
- Chapter 168 - 168: System’s Jump
- Chapter 169 - 169: System’s Opportunist
- Chapter 170 - 170: System’s Opportunist - 2
- Chapter 171 - 171: System’s Sixth level
- Chapter 172 - 172: System’s Opportunist - 3
- Chapter 173 - 173: System’s Chaos
- Chapter 174 - 174: System’s Caos - 2
- Chapter 175 - 175: System’s Caos - 3
- Chapter 176 - 176: System’s Judgment
- Chapter 177 - 177: System’s Hard Love
- Chapter 178 - 178: System’s Sixth Level - 2
- Chapter 179 - 179: System’s Sixth Level - 3
- Chapter 180 - 180: System’s Sixth Level - 4
- Chapter 181 - 181: System’s Long Hours
- Chapter 182 - 182: System’s Sixth Level - 5
- Chapter 183 - 183: System’s Rest
- Chapter 184 - 184: System’s Alchemy
- Chapter 185 - 185: System’s Sixth Level - 6
- Chapter 186 - 186: System’s Penguin
- Chapter 187 - 187: System’s Inspiration
- Chapter 188 - 188: System’s Engineering
- Chapter 189 - 189: System’s First Human Construction
- Chapter 190 - 190: System’s Companions
- Chapter 191 - 191: System’s Experiment
- Chapter 192 - 192: System’s Ascent
- Chapter 193 - 193: System’s Vigil
- Chapter 194 - 194: System’s Vigil Rewarded